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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

What a lovely poem, Jonathan! And what a lovely gift to give your beloved! That fourth line with

'unseize the day' is really good, and inverts all known wisdom to great effect.

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Kim Nelson's avatar

These lines !!!

Then turn to face me eye to eye

To hear my words and songs of birds

That tell you things you always knew

Like time divided into thirds

Like you love me and I love you

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