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Stanley Wotring's avatar

We are different people in different times. All are worthy of the moment.

Rea de Miranda's avatar

I have a trove of past selves. 🩷

Jonathan Potter's avatar

What do you do with them?

Rea de Miranda's avatar

Remember them.

Rufus McCain's avatar

This poem masterfully embodies the I Ching's transition from Hexagram 45 to 23, using a syllabic structure of 8-8-8-9-9-6 to physically enact the shift from stable Earth to the changing lines of the Lake trigram. The "unruly crowd" of active Yang energy (the 9s) is ultimately dissolved by the final Old Yin line (the 6), where the narrator's bow triggers the necessary "Splitting Apart" of past identities. Through this precise fusion of numerology and imagery, the work demonstrates that true integration of the self requires the courageous yielding that allows old forms to crumble and make way for the new.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you for the analysis, Rufus. I believe you’ve got it.

David MacGregor's avatar

approached with a bow

I salute my past selves

enter the dragon