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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Beautiful.. The hobbit in you is coming out. ;^)

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Haha, thanks Frodo

Gary Spangler's avatar

Your words flow gracefully, Jonathan.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Gary

Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

What a beautiful, graceful poem depicting a very human scene that somehow totally transcends itself. These recent six-liners lend themselves particularly well to your skill-set, Jonathan!

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Martin!

Patris's avatar

I heard the shushing rain sweep the skylight as I read this beauty…

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you Patris

Michael Yearout in the desert's avatar

That provokes a beautiful image.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you Michael

Simone Senisin's avatar

Love it 😊

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you Simone 🙏

Charlotte Balladine's avatar

Absolutely adored the imagery in this one - amazing work.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Charlotte

Wendy  Gray's avatar

Ah, a lovely morning. Beautiful poem, Jonathan! 💜