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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

"every breath along the river

is held like a loaded gun"

What an image that is - especially in a poem that also has a hidden coyote! Makes one ask, who exactly is retreating from the night and why?

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Ann Collins's avatar

“Let there be a vault between the waters to separate water from water.”

I understand this better now after watching your gorgeous little film.

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