this stanza feels like adolescence knocking politely rather than kicking the door in. It expands the poem’s emotional and intellectual bandwidth without changing its weather. Exactly the right move at this stage.
That feeling of losing one's feet for days...and arriving at a developmental intersection you'd never been at before, with new ideas and a lot of gliding. This is so relatable, and so evocative.
That billboard art...artifact of another time.
No kidding ...
Ah, the farm town high school water fountains with that used ball of chew looking like modern cowboy installation art...
I should probably clarify that I was only about ten years old at the time and Mark was a precocious pre-teen tobacco chewer.
Excellent. Clean. Love story and choosing who you're going to be. Life. Mr. Potter👌
Thank you, Mr Hettenbach
Double signs Do not enter
Yet couple walk
Their own way.
I was surprised to find the photo on unsplash.
I Ching is cast.
Fortune unknown.
Let it be.
this stanza feels like adolescence knocking politely rather than kicking the door in. It expands the poem’s emotional and intellectual bandwidth without changing its weather. Exactly the right move at this stage.
That feeling of losing one's feet for days...and arriving at a developmental intersection you'd never been at before, with new ideas and a lot of gliding. This is so relatable, and so evocative.