Anatomy of a Hangover down drunkedly (i think) a pathless road which led to (hoped) a sober place, crawled (numbed) myself with full and sloshing load. with not a thought, my mind (a bigger space than all the floor) did smile to find a face which seemed not real but still resembled mine. i soon found self with toilet in embrace — my guts up-through eight times (or maybe nine.) now then is done and when's again and wine is gone and whiskey's flushed — remember not a thing do i, and too, i feel not fine, for 'tween my skull and brain has since been wrought a heavy hanging metal chain to clang. (and was it i last night who sang?)
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not only cool writing but such neat cursive, wow...!
I love how you elevate the puking of poetry.