Raft revision

[Stanley Wotring]

Thanks for showing us the thinking behind your thinking!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks Stan

[Ronald Drimmel]

I approve.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you

[Karen E Sandberg]

I really like the poem. Good images and clarity.

[Gary Spangler]

The lights are on and somebody’s home. The poet to be sure.

[Petra]

Lovely piece/tribute for your daughter. <3