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Mr . Ma's avatar

🙃🙃🙃🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks for dropping by, Mr. Ma

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Richbee's avatar

Wildlife war is another way to watch the Sun rise blood red over the eastern Washington wasteland front.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Richard

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Wow this poem makes me feel alone, afraid, and anticipatory all at the same time.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Stan — mission accomplished.

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Mark Rico's avatar

I love the rhyme scheme of this one, internal/end, the whole deal. Great rhythm to it.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Mark

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Fotini Masika's avatar

The last two lines wrap this up beautifully.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Fotini

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