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Mr . Ma's avatar

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks for dropping by, Mr. Ma

Richbee's avatar

Wildlife war is another way to watch the Sun rise blood red over the eastern Washington wasteland front.

Stanley Wotring's avatar

Wow this poem makes me feel alone, afraid, and anticipatory all at the same time.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Stan — mission accomplished.

Mark Rico's avatar

I love the rhyme scheme of this one, internal/end, the whole deal. Great rhythm to it.

Fotini Masika's avatar

The last two lines wrap this up beautifully.

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Fotini