Sunrise 1/9/24
Spokane, Washington
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Triolet #1
The rain this morning came and went, In dark it fell on fallen snow. It fell as I drove in lament: The rain this morning came and went. As I drove round the town and spent Insomnia's faint sunrise glow, The rain this morning came and went, In dark it fell on fallen snow.
Beautiful, so balanced. The windshield wipers in the accompanying video clip emphasizes rhythmic progression of time. The “came and went “ lines emphasize the ‘the this too shall pass’ aspect of its nature.
There's magic in repetition.
Great write.