mountain above, sky below --> fire above, fire below
Such a warm tribute, with river and light imagery carrying a quiet sense of becoming, and an ending that lingers softly. <3
Thank you, Petra
<3
This is one of your most beautiful and inspired poems What a wonderful birthday gift! Not to mention the gorgeous photo of the "the rising light." I particularly like that last verse.. It has a touch of Cohen's "Anthem" about it.
The way you hold onto faith
in the motions of your dreams deferred
keeps your soul intact in time
and bends the rising light
through the cracks in the everything
where you still hear the birds sing.
Thank you, Martin
You are welcome, my friend. Check out my new post. I think you will like this one,
What a lovely birthday gift, Jonathan.
Thank you, Paul
A pleasure, Jonathan—Happy Spring!
Jonathan this is so very beautiful
Such a warm tribute, with river and light imagery carrying a quiet sense of becoming, and an ending that lingers softly. <3
Thank you, Petra
<3
This is one of your most beautiful and inspired poems What a wonderful birthday gift! Not to mention the gorgeous photo of the "the rising light." I particularly like that last verse.. It has a touch of Cohen's "Anthem" about it.
The way you hold onto faith
in the motions of your dreams deferred
keeps your soul intact in time
and bends the rising light
through the cracks in the everything
where you still hear the birds sing.
Thank you, Martin
You are welcome, my friend. Check out my new post. I think you will like this one,
What a lovely birthday gift, Jonathan.
Thank you, Paul
A pleasure, Jonathan—Happy Spring!
Jonathan this is so very beautiful