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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Anybody could write about a tree, Jonathan, but not many (if any) could capture that moment, with the sun coming behind it and way it stirred your heart and led you on to something you had missed before. I like all three verses, but particularly the first one because it sets the scene so well and your instinctive response to it:

"All the times I've looked at this tree

With the sun coming up behind

Its branches signalling me

In a way aloof but kind,

I've felt something stir inside

My heart that I thought had died."

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Cynthia's avatar

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