All the times I've looked at this tree With the sun coming up behind Its branches signalling me In a way aloof but kind, I've felt something stir inside My heart that I thought had died. I've had to turn away, retreat From the blinding light of that thought, But even then the something sweet, The something that can't be bought, Has lingered, an aftertaste Of something that can't be chased. So I take a step back, exist In the one moment that contains Everything I somehow missed In all my pleasures and pains, And wait for some kind of sign In the shadows soft and fine.
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Anybody could write about a tree, Jonathan, but not many (if any) could capture that moment, with the sun coming behind it and way it stirred your heart and led you on to something you had missed before. I like all three verses, but particularly the first one because it sets the scene so well and your instinctive response to it:
"All the times I've looked at this tree
With the sun coming up behind
Its branches signalling me
In a way aloof but kind,
I've felt something stir inside
My heart that I thought had died."
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