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Jed Moffitt's avatar

Your pictures of your notebook would indicate that these just came out in a stream? Like a Beatles song? Damn, that sonnet was good, and I loves me some egg sandwiches, cooked in just the way you describe (well, maybe a little different, I have my own variations. Sometimes I tear a hole in the bread and put the egg inside and fry the whole thing and slice avocado on it) but I digress from my point, as though I had one.

Sometimes I feel like the poems I read here are karmically connected in sequence, and the feeling of your sonnet had the same deep feeling I had when I read Caroline Mellor's lates post.

But like the egg sandwiches, they have a similar vibe, but different preparations.

As you perhaps, suspect, Jonathan, I feel a certain hobo kindship to you and your path (like the egg sandwiches, I do my own varietal of hobo) but here in this sonnet, I have never been so proud to be one to see things from the shadowed side of the street.

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Patris's avatar

Excellence Jonathan. Then and now. Wonderful

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