Love this confident journey--breath out-- of a poem! As a teacher--This question of what is leading , stealing, and what is facilitating the imagination---is a good one. A big question for me. Moment to moment how much form does someone need--to feel --not lonely maybe--or a gentle embrace or delight--and what can start to rip at her clothes--her hair, or something....
Be your own North Star and you’ll always have direction!
“I’ll trust my dreams to lead me.” Love that! ❤️
I've done what I do 10,000 times.
I know when it rhymes.
I do not seek advice,
but comments welcome.
to suggest changes is a vice
Love this confident journey--breath out-- of a poem! As a teacher--This question of what is leading , stealing, and what is facilitating the imagination---is a good one. A big question for me. Moment to moment how much form does someone need--to feel --not lonely maybe--or a gentle embrace or delight--and what can start to rip at her clothes--her hair, or something....
PS. I just realize now, this title--well that offers a bit of an answer! (to ask for consent is a good reminder).
Sweet poem, Jonathan. I would never pass up a nap under a tree.
Cool tree Jonathan. Cool poem as well!
Lovely ✨
Thank you, Maya
declaration of independence