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“Lyrical fun” - that says it all!

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Sep 25Liked by Jonathan Potter

Thanks for posting another one!

I wasn’t trying to rhyme with the last line, honest. These are intriguing.

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Sep 25Liked by Jonathan Potter

I learned something! :)

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This looked fun to write!

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Double dactyl dog dare you.

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Sep 26Liked by Jonathan Potter

Bingo!

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Fascinating! You could have moved the made up word to the sixth line to.be more traditional. But nonetheless impressive!

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