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Richbee's avatar

A ball revolves ,spins , balances on a finger of fate. Wine pours from evaporated rain recycles love in a glass and good vintage is found sincerely yours.

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Very powerful, “the bounty of the rain

to be transubstantiated

into the gifts of grapes and wine".

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Perry J. Greenbaum 🇨🇦 🦜's avatar

Beaconsfield is a lovely suburb of Montreal. Still on the island, near the water.

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Tina Stolberg's avatar

What a beautiful couple!

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Patris's avatar

Lovely. And so is the poem.

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Mike Speriosu's avatar

Gorgeous verse, my friend. And you two look bright and healthy in that Canadian summer. Cheers!

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Monica P.'s avatar

Beautiful verse, and the two of you look so very happy.

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Marc Mannheimer's avatar

That's beautiful.

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Inspiring. Thanks Jonathan.

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