Gliding Past the Rising Sun

[John Martin]

A fine faultless piece of work, with an interesting rhyme scheme.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, John

[Stanley Wotring]

I see therefore I be.

[Ann Collins]

How utterly magical--your words, the sliding clouds, and the moment when a plane shoots across the sky!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Ann— yes!

[Melanie Bettinelli]

The video of the moving clouds is mesmerizing. I love the accompanying sonnet. The beauty of the clouds communicating love and teaching how to meet your neighbor with love.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Melanie

[Richard Blaisdell]

Gliders, guide. Wings movement

[Mark Rico]

This has everything you'd want from a sonnet. Beautiful piece of thoughtful writing.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Marco

[Margaret Ann Silver]

Beautiful.

[Dr. Deborah Hall]

lovely holy

you express the joy

in your eyes