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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Memories of the past help predict the future.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Sometimes as a reversal, hopefully

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Weight of sky slows down the pace.

Rise up and the dream memories fade.

Leaves you with first step into the day

To deal with the dark and gray with a light

Flutter in your heart.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

ah, thank you, Richard

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Daniel Henderson's avatar

" the taste of dreams" goes so well with the title!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you, Daniel

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Marilyn Jones's avatar

Hi, I’m from the NW countryside south of Portland. I look forward to your art: poetry and photography 💜 There are 10 Substack I read daily. I’m semiretired since Covid

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Marilyn -- you live in a beautiful area.

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Marilyn Jones's avatar

Oops too much blab…

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Patris's avatar

No!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

I agree!

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Marilyn Jones's avatar

I look forward to ur poetry always. Thank you 🫶🏻

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Karen Kenworthy's avatar

I hope on the roof you saw that memory floating off and away! 👍

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you, Karen -- it was a process but I got there

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Mark Rico's avatar

"the weight of old gray skies" - great line!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you, Mark

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