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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Bethel

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Great photo, great poem.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Mathew

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Connie J. Casella's avatar

Sometimes I wish I could think of words like these! Great poem!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Connie

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man of aran's avatar

‘rise to my unspoken occasion’ great line!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Alan

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Richbee's avatar

Let the eyes open, see past the veil — over the vale — that the universal clouds remain the same when you look towards the sky; no matter wherever you are clouds cover the sun but the sun still shines if you believe and have faith that later the sky pilot will shine on your day.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Richard

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Seems as there’s a parallel between the sun and yourself showing a hidden strength behind the “curtain “.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

That’s right — thanks, Stan

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Monica P.'s avatar

Embrace the day as it is.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Yes — thanks, Monica

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Patris's avatar

Resilience lovingly spoken

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

I hope so — thanks, Patris

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

"seven veils of the hundred clouds of morning" Great line Jonathan.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Ron

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onecloud's avatar

"I find myself inwardly rise

to my unspoken occasion."

wonderful !

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you, onecloud -- and for the restack

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