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How wonderful. We could all use a miracle.

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Word! We could all use a miracle.

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Amen

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Thank you, Patris -- yes, miracles all around

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Great Los Angeles poem and some fancy poetry foot work with the "dozzina (double sestina)."

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Thank you, Pamela -- I like the "fancy footwork" descriptor!

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It just came to me in a flash of inspiration!

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Don't know how you do it. Amazing.

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Thank you, Ann.

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A poem with so many memories. I concur, we could all use a miracle.

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Thank you, Monica

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Thank you Jonathan for this vibrant writing and telling of your life.

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Thank you, Gary

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This makes me feel at home. Thank you, sir. This beauty reminds me of one of my favorites I wrote a while back “take my song to the coast “.

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Which in turn reminds me of this: https://jopomojo.substack.com/p/if-you-could-give-me-a-ride

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We take the Starlight every summer from LA to San Diego to see the horse races. DeMar is located within walking distance of the train station. It’s always a pleasant family outing.

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Nice — thanks Charlotte

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A few years ago the trip back from Delmar was a nightmare. Someone fell off the train at one of the stops. I think in San Juan Capistrano. Been up near Irvine a day tree had fallen on the tracks. We are on the plane for about three hours until the tree was removed. But we made a lot of friends! Lol!

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Oh wow.

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Thanks, sis 🙏

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A wonderful tribute. Indeed, nothing will be as it was before. Cherish the memories, treasure the now.

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Thank you, Ron — your summation applies nicely to life in general, too. Words to live by

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This makes me reminisce about memories that aren't even my own. Evocative work.

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A great comment, Mark, thank you

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Much I like here. "Tony Alva" blew me away!

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Thanks Fred. I put Alva in as an iconic L.A. stand in for Hawk.

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