Lost

[Mark Rico]

"but now I seem to be lost,

at a loss, in the wilds of patience,

waiting and watching as I walk

across the piano keys

of changing light and shade"

These words dance.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Mark — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Mark Rico]

I did! Your take and his made a beautiful pairing.

[Patris]

All of these words dance. The anticipation of what’s to come is profoundly moving..

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Patris — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Harley King]

Strong images and metaphors!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Harley — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Frederick Fullerton]

Love the metaphor of piano keys to describe shades of light and dark.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Frederick — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Stanley Wotring]

Finding company while you’re alone.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Stan — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Jed Moffitt]

Absolutely lovely Jon. Thank you for slowing me down and calling out the papery birch bark as I get ready to lay me down on the acupuncturists table.

You reliably provide a perspective on the world that is relaxing.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Jed — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Carrie Skinner]

Just so beautiful and slightly melancholic.

Your words had me wandering in deep forests of reality and mind.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Carrie — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Carrie Skinner]

I did! Two wonderful poems and poets.

[Ronald Drimmel]

Love where you took this Jonathan.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Ron — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already

[Brendan]

The next poem is ever an invitation so - to write the next story. Love the weave of world with creative imagination here.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Brendan — be sure to check out Sam’s poem too if you haven’t already