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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Those 80 mph midnights on I-90...

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

I dream of St. Regis trout ...

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you for the restack, Leslie.

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JASON RICHARDS.'s avatar

Awesome

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you

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Briana Elizabeth's avatar

Great work!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you!

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Resident20Some's avatar

This post has me imagining a life I’ve never lived. One far away from where I am now

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks for reading

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

I want to be in that poem. You set the scene so well.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Stan, i can picture you in it.

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House of Neglected Poetry's avatar

Love it!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks!

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

Bravo. I love this.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Mathew -- one of the first things I wrote when I got started with Substack.

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Owl Green's avatar

Montana (and big, wide-open places in general) make me feel this way too! That particular heart-yearning as you’re reminded of a life you’ve never lived. There’s probably an evocative Japanese word for that feeling. :)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Rebecca. If there’s not a word for it, one may need to be coined!

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Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

I was born in Montana! It’s my home although I live in California now, but we’re I live here in the Sierra Nevada foothills reminds me so much of home. Thank you so much for sharing. You nailed Montana 🏔♥️

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you 🙏

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Having grown up in Montana, I can testify that "The landscape swallows you up at any speed" catches the essence of the Big Sky Country perfectly.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

To quote Wild Bill Hickok: I’m much obliged, Montana. (Deadwood)

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

"You are not who you are in Montana" So many possibilities in this line. I am inspired. It's such a wonderful line, it rings all the bells!! I am working on a poem right now and hearing this is useful.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you Rebecca -- I'm glad it struck some creative sparks for you.

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