dozzina (double sestina)
Note the trick that happens at the end of the last line of the seventh stanza.
Ice sculpture that bridges the crystalline gap. A skating love of an island that sit in St Lawrence seaway a paradise to be praised in two languages that speak the same language of love.
This definitely deserved the rerun! My favorite lines has to be:
"My love possesses one of many bridges
And I the only alchemist to melt
The gold to pave the way across, to skate
My way on wheels, each one beneath its well"
Quite the impressive image you spun here!
Note the trick that happens at the end of the last line of the seventh stanza.
Ice sculpture that bridges the crystalline gap. A skating love of an island that sit in St Lawrence seaway a paradise to be praised in two languages that speak the same language of love.
This definitely deserved the rerun! My favorite lines has to be:
"My love possesses one of many bridges
And I the only alchemist to melt
The gold to pave the way across, to skate
My way on wheels, each one beneath its well"
Quite the impressive image you spun here!