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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

This is an interesting poem because you use the Bref Double, and you handle that poetic form quite well with its mixture of rhymed and unrhymed lines. I particularly like the feminisation of your vision and that fine suggestive line about wanting 'To touch your skirt as the day starts.'

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Beautiful poem. I found the end a little too abrupt so I read it again. It's all there, you are leading us to it, I don't know why I found the cold winter arrive too unexpectedly. The words and flow match the title very well.

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