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B S Freeman's avatar

The future Strange as an empty tomb it a fabulous line. But I wasn’t sure about “the saw”…a double meaning? Trees or skyscrapers on the sky line suggested themselves.

Thanks for the piece.

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B S Freeman's avatar

Aah now I get it from the photo!

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Patris's avatar

What a shift - from nature to …a yawning future..

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Teeth of the saw.

Seen wide open , an arete

Snow top teeth

My jaws dropped

Moving in motion

Pan the horizon

Sun rises, sets must be

A mountain relief, awesome.

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Ceejae Devine's avatar

It's a funny thing what happens inside when mundane places you've known all your life suddenly appear in a different light.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks for the comment Ceejae — so true

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