I Ching #2, lines 1, 2, 3, and 5 changing
Religion in nature’s terms
I whispered, "Wow" under my breath and I read this poem. Your poems have inspired a future (still very secret) project!
Pushing up daisies. A sunrise retreat going some where to discover a few feet away is the beginning of the end if you comprehend the condominium door opens both ways like sol rises and falls each day. Take a moment. Pick some flowers.
When I was very close I was curious.
I love line 2 in I Ching. This is a new experience and very nice. The pic is beautiful!
Gosh that's good.
Nice change to #5.
Religion in nature’s terms
I whispered, "Wow" under my breath and I read this poem. Your poems have inspired a future (still very secret) project!
Pushing up daisies. A sunrise retreat going some where to discover a few feet away is the beginning of the end if you comprehend the condominium door opens both ways like sol rises and falls each day. Take a moment. Pick some flowers.
When I was very close I was curious.
I love line 2 in I Ching. This is a new experience and very nice. The pic is beautiful!
Gosh that's good.
Nice change to #5.