There is a good rhythm to this poem that really drives it along, and which I find quite appropriate for describing a drive through Montana. I also like that second last line. Not many poets writing now write a line as memorable as 'the sunrise in eternal now'.
Hello Jonathan Potter I apologize for repeating a few lines in the poem which I have now edited out. Your beautiful poem about the dawn and dust reminded me of the Battle of Jena
Memories from the past are melded together to form an expectation of the future.
Thank you, Stan
There is a good rhythm to this poem that really drives it along, and which I find quite appropriate for describing a drive through Montana. I also like that second last line. Not many poets writing now write a line as memorable as 'the sunrise in eternal now'.
Thank you, Martin. Your comments are gratifying and helpful.
I am reminded of War of Worlds with light pole “eyes” like an alien drone shooting laser beams. A time I never want to know.
Thanks, Richard, I’ve been meaning to read that.
Scares the goose bumps right off your arms like a laser beam raised them and mowed them down with drone concentrated eyes.
Hello Jonathan Potter
Sunday Morning Sidewalk
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Hello David MacGregor. I suppose I must read and ponder what’s linked to here, eh. Sunday morning it is.
Hello Jonathan Potter I apologize for repeating a few lines in the poem which I have now edited out. Your beautiful poem about the dawn and dust reminded me of the Battle of Jena
Sheaves of sunlight! Love that image.
Thanks, Mark
kudos on an underused and underrated form
Thank you