Yes! The non-oblique abutment ... there have been a number of other coincidences for you in that city I think.
Decidedly less splendor these days, but I’m hopeful good times will recur. Right now we’re dealing with an unhealthy amount of smoke, but that’ll blow over soon.
Wow, I really knew nothing about Seattle except the space needle and it being home to tech billionaires; but this poem really knocked it out of the park. I loved the sestina format which created so many cool lines and images. Now I feel I experienced Seattle. For some reason, this kind of reminded me of some of Apollinaire's poetry when he was singing about Paris. This was great.
This is such a wonderful piece of the Seattle experience, Jonathan! I have only been a handful of times, yet your poem brought to me familiar places and a few parallel experiences! Fabulously well done! And, I feel a warm chuckle as I think of my cousin who has lived there her whole life. Thank you for this picture of a special city.
Thank you, Wendy. Your comments are tremendously gratifying. I’m grateful anytime someone is willing to read a mammoth poem such as this in the first place — so blessings on your head for that, too!
Glad I could show you around.
What an epic journey, I enjoyed every step!
Thanks Lorraine! I feel like I need to write another one covering everything I left out.
It's an amazing accomplishment to write that way. The story is fantastic too. Keep going!
Fun, ingenious, and a lovely nostalgic trip through some favorite haunts from my 15 years or so in Seattle.
Thank you!
When were you there?
From 1986 to 1997, and again from 1999 to 2005.
My time there overlaps quite a bit with yours.
Magnificent. My favorite of the double sestinas for cities, if only because I live in Seattle.
And your backyard gets obliquely mentioned
Yes! The non-oblique abutment ... there have been a number of other coincidences for you in that city I think.
Decidedly less splendor these days, but I’m hopeful good times will recur. Right now we’re dealing with an unhealthy amount of smoke, but that’ll blow over soon.
Wow, I really knew nothing about Seattle except the space needle and it being home to tech billionaires; but this poem really knocked it out of the park. I loved the sestina format which created so many cool lines and images. Now I feel I experienced Seattle. For some reason, this kind of reminded me of some of Apollinaire's poetry when he was singing about Paris. This was great.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
This is an immersive experience of a piece - full of sehnsucht.
Thanks for reading it!
This is such a wonderful piece of the Seattle experience, Jonathan! I have only been a handful of times, yet your poem brought to me familiar places and a few parallel experiences! Fabulously well done! And, I feel a warm chuckle as I think of my cousin who has lived there her whole life. Thank you for this picture of a special city.
Blessings, ~Wendy💜
Thank you, Wendy. Your comments are tremendously gratifying. I’m grateful anytime someone is willing to read a mammoth poem such as this in the first place — so blessings on your head for that, too!