Something Like the Sunrise

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[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you 🙏

[Gary Spangler]

So very well said, Jonathan.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Gary

[Ann Collins]

"baring its teeth at my broken heart"

thank you for re-posting, Jonathan

[Jed Moffitt]

You mean, the rules... They are optional?

Contained in this poem are the entirety of the law and the prophets.

We can call it, the super new testament...

[Jonathan Potter]

Marvelous, Jed, thank you. But maybe it’s more like a gloss on Ecclesiastes…

[Jed Moffitt]

I see it now.

[Jed Moffitt]

My mistress's eyes

Are something like the sunrise

[Jonathan Potter]

Shakespeare

Hold my beer

[Martin Mc Carthy]

This fine sonnet flows so effortlessly that Shakespeare's spirit must be giving you an approving smile. Thank for sharing, Jonathan!

[Jonathan Potter]

Many thanks, Martin!