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Tina Stolberg's avatar

The structure is genius.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Tina

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

My teeth chattered as I read this poem. The way you can draw out such emotions in a limited number of syllables is amazing.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Stan.

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Patris's avatar

What a beautiful morning you describe. Wishing for one here.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Patris. I hope you get one soon. The day here got even sunnier and more encouraging.

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Patris's avatar

Am living vicariously!

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Diana Melrose's avatar

The lack of punctuation is actually really powerful sometimes.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Diana. I was feeling that here.

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Marilyn Jones's avatar

Loved this winter snow poem ‼️

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Marilyn!

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