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The structure is genius.

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Thank you, Tina

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My teeth chattered as I read this poem. The way you can draw out such emotions in a limited number of syllables is amazing.

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Thanks, Stan.

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What a beautiful morning you describe. Wishing for one here.

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Thanks, Patris. I hope you get one soon. The day here got even sunnier and more encouraging.

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Am living vicariously!

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The lack of punctuation is actually really powerful sometimes.

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Thanks, Diana. I was feeling that here.

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Loved this winter snow poem ‼️

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Thank you, Marilyn!

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