Sunrise 11/26/23

[Stanley Wotring]

I loved the rhythm of the poem and the picture of fuzziness the words paint. If this poem was an actual painting, it would be impressionist.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks Stan, I like that.

[Karen E Sandberg]

nice rhyming...

[Jonathan Potter]

i thank you

and i rank you

higher and less benter

than the average commenter

[Patris]

That cadence and the ‘smudge’ leaves me smiling at these playful lines - Stanley’s right - it paints itself.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Patris.

[onecloud]

wonderful poem . and as always , great sunrise .

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you 🙏