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Alicia's avatar

Beautiful!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Alicia

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

I love the colors described the sky, they provide dimensions to the poem while the lion’s mane gives it texture.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Stan

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Patris's avatar

A cake that’s too good not to want more, these images, these words are rich.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Patris

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Mark L's avatar

Great Poem

Even if your from the West Island

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Ha! Thank you, Mark. (I'm a stranger on a strange island.)

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Mark L's avatar

Me too!

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Karen E Sandberg's avatar

Word and picture steps into the day. Love it.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Karen

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Mark Rico's avatar

The relief and release in these lines is palpable.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Mark.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

What a journey, Jonathan -Thank you!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Many thanks, Paul

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Troy Putney's avatar

Gorgeous

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Troy

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

Nicely done.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you

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Mary Pierce's avatar

So beautiful! Thank you for this on a cold Wisconsin morning.

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Mary Pierce's avatar

I was drawn back to read again. The luscious imagery: clinic of solar psychology, yellow beret, layers of dessert, dreams of flying south in a song (aha! I see the plane! ), turbulence of joy and love, purple waves breathing. What a glorious gift you have and I feel blessed this morning by your sharing it.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks so much for these lovely comments, Mary!

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onecloud's avatar

deeply personal!

"reminds me of a time I tried

my hand at monastic life.

But the climax of the sun

risen there I now anoint. "

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

yes! thank you

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Hey, have you read Jonathan's poem? It’s a lovely piece of work and I’m only going to talk about the last lines.

Please read the entire poem yourself. He uses this cool metaphor, comparing the sun's radiance to a lion's majestic mane. I mean, how awesome is that? It instantly grabs your attention and gives off this powerful vibe.

And then he talks about how the sun "holds this moment together." It's like he's saying that the sun is the glue that keeps everything in balance. Pretty deep, right?

But what really got me is when he mentions the "turbulence of joy above and the love below." It's like he's saying that both joy and love are in this constant state of movement and excitement. It adds this burst of energy to the whole poem.

And let's not forget about those purple waves breathing in the wash of umber-orange. Can you picture it? It's like this vivid, colorful scene that comes to life in your mind. It's so mesmerizing!

And you know what? Jonathan ends it with "everything and everyone." It's like he's saying that the magic and beauty of this moment extend beyond what he's described. It's all-encompassing, embracing everything in existence.

I really think Jonathan nailed it with this poem.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you, thank you, thank you, Gloria, you make me feel so good about this poem, and the poem thanks you as well

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Anytime!

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Jason McBride's avatar

This is whole thing is fantastic! The poetry and photography are stunningly and essential to each other.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Jason, I feel I'm walking in your poetic footsteps

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Martha Griffis's avatar

Lovely words and photographs.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

I love this Jonathan! Thank you for taking me on your light chasing sunrise journey with your poem and photos!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Pamela!

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