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Stanley Wotring's avatar

This poem gives a whole new take on shadow boxing.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Ha! Thanks, Stan

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Nice one. Fantastic fun!

(".. beneath the trees."?)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Ron. I like your suggestion — but the sky leads into the next line.

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John Martin's avatar

A well worked-out conceit.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, John

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Short but packs a delicious punch :).

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Ha! Thanks, MA

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Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

I always love a squirrel poem!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Squirrels are skittering avatars of wonder.

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Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

YES!

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