The Broken Line in the Sky

[Rod Bluhm]

There’s so much wisdom in these lines, Jonathan, and it’s masterfully written.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Rod

[Gary Spangler]

In part a cautionary tale. And a message of possible hopefulness. Thank you so much, Jonathan.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Gary

[Kathleen Hobbs]

Keep moving, don't look back, have perseverance. It seems like the end may be a new beginning. I really like this.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Kathleen

[Kathleen Hobbs]

You're welcome, Jonathan

[Philip Costea]

I won't Jonathan. I promise I won't.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you for pledging, Philip :)

[Writer Pilgrim by So Elite]

The flow of the final stanza in particular speaks to me. The true and false and white and black are filled with meaning and you've weaved another wonderful poem for us. Thank you. Beautiful imagery!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Pilgrim! (Thanks for sending me back to it for a reread.)