Jonathan, if I could, I would call DoorDash to deliver to you: a warm rosy dawn sky, a nice long walk, and a hot cup of tea. I'm glad you have poetry as a way to transform feelings into verse, a fertile ground for creativity 💛💛💛
Ahh, thank you, Ann, yes indeed poetry is a great consolation through thick and thin and every season and microseason. The walk I took this morning was, too -- stay tuned for my report after I thaw out a bit!
Jonathan, if I could, I would call DoorDash to deliver to you: a warm rosy dawn sky, a nice long walk, and a hot cup of tea. I'm glad you have poetry as a way to transform feelings into verse, a fertile ground for creativity 💛💛💛
Ahh, thank you, Ann, yes indeed poetry is a great consolation through thick and thin and every season and microseason. The walk I took this morning was, too -- stay tuned for my report after I thaw out a bit!
Fun poem. I like the rhyming structure.
I was going to say that the rhyming was all over the place but then see that it is intentional. I might have to try this form one day.
Go for it
Thank you, Frederick
Great poem!
Thank you, Stan
Extremely satisfying structure and tone and construction. Great craft Jonathan. Bringing life to the great dark.
Thank you, Jed
What a wonderful rhythm to this! The opening and closing couplets are my favorites.
Thank you, Margaret Ann