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Liz Gauffreau's avatar

I like it!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

thank you!

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Liz Gauffreau's avatar

You're welcome!

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Liz Gauffreau's avatar

You’re welcome!

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Broo's avatar

Is that a villanelle— or a new invention: a potterism?!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Rondel, whatever that is :)

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Bliss Grey's avatar

Sharpen your pencil. Break the Dawn. haha, I just wrote about this yesterday.

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Mark Rico's avatar

Spare, and perfectly balanced. Love what you did with the image.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Mark

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Excellent, Jonathan!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Rod

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

What a phrase: "at the break of broken day."

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Margaret Ann.

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