The Frozen River

[Gary W. Sherwin]

Very good. I appreciate your greater letter to background contrast as well

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Gary

[Fred Hanson]

I like.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks Fred 🙏

[Patris]

These are just perfect. I hope you collect and publish them.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Patris

[Jonathan Potter]

Patris, I should know this by now, but would you mind staying here for the public record how your name is pronounced? Is it PAAH-triss or puhh-TREESE?

[Patris]

Second pronunciation. (the bane of my existence when I was small, though I own it now.)

[Jonathan Potter]

I like that version

[Broo]

"I am he as you are he, as you are me and we are all together..."(!)

-- the eggman

[Jed Moffitt]

I am looking a bit like the Walrus myself. But at least Paul is not dead yet.

[Jonathan Potter]

Hey, I saw him in Spokane a few years ago!

[Jonathan Potter]

Whoa!

[Ann Collins]

This poem is its own little fireplace...so warm now...thank you!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Ann. The perfect response.

[Jed Moffitt]

The superposition of the words on the photo entangles me with high probability.

[Jonathan Potter]

Mission accomplished

[Ronald Drimmel]

Best use of the word "quantum" that I've read so far this year. Cutting edge poetry. Keep it up!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Dr Drimmel — I take that as high praise coming from a bona fide astrophysicist-poet.