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Karen E Sandberg's avatar

I love the gentle rhyming in this gentle poem.

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John Martin's avatar

I liked the volta. But the last two words of the poem I found somewhat bathetic. Couldn't you have found something a little less lame? 'It's a pity to spoil the ship for a pen'orth of tar.'

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