rerun from last year
I love the gentle rhyming in this gentle poem.
Thank you, Karen
I read this out loud and loved the flow of your words. And so happy for the little tree.
Thank you, Kathleen, I love the thought of you reading it out loud — a particular honor
What a lovely sonnet-- lovely sound play. I don't think I've ever seen one end in three rhyming couplets like that.
Wonderful they were able to save the tree, I've never heard of that kind of clamping.
Thank you, Melanie
I liked the volta. But the last two words of the poem I found somewhat bathetic. Couldn't you have found something a little less lame? 'It's a pity to spoil the ship for a pen'orth of tar.'
I’ll try to suck less in the future.
I love the gentle rhyming in this gentle poem.
Thank you, Karen
I read this out loud and loved the flow of your words. And so happy for the little tree.
Thank you, Kathleen, I love the thought of you reading it out loud — a particular honor
What a lovely sonnet-- lovely sound play. I don't think I've ever seen one end in three rhyming couplets like that.
Wonderful they were able to save the tree, I've never heard of that kind of clamping.
Thank you, Melanie
I liked the volta. But the last two words of the poem I found somewhat bathetic. Couldn't you have found something a little less lame? 'It's a pity to spoil the ship for a pen'orth of tar.'
I’ll try to suck less in the future.