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Sharon Hudson's avatar

"Waiting like a friendless friend, Who takes your hand and smiles grimly, As the sun begins to set.." It could be night falling, or death coming. It has such a sharp edge. Very powerful, Jonathan! The photos are incredible!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Sharon!

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Mary Pierce's avatar

"As the sun begins to set

As if pierced by bayonet,"

Oooh!!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Mary

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Patris's avatar

So damn beautiful

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks so much, Patris

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Kim Nelson's avatar

You capture such beauty, Jonathan, in both image and word.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Kim

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Deborah Brasket's avatar

Beautiful. The sonnet is such a lovely form to work with.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Deborah. I agree

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rena's avatar

Yes

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

A rollicking death march.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Fantastic comment, thanks Stan

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

It's a pleasure to read something as good as this. This is a wonderful sonnet.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks so much, Martin

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Monica P.'s avatar

So very beautiful. Your words and photographs are wonderful on their own, but together with your voice take it to another dimension.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you for listening, Monica

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

My favorite lines:

"And death itself the absent catcher

Beyond horizons in the end

Waiting like a friendless friend"

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Margaret Ann

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jennae's avatar

beautiful!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, jennae

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Cynthia's avatar

🔥🔥🔥

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

🙏 🙏 🙏

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

As I approach the end of life, I rather like to think that death is not a "friendless friend." Instead, I think of someone gentle, laying me down for a nap in the forest, pulling up the very earth to blanket me.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Rebecca, that’s a much better way to think of it 🙏

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Your words in the rhymes are also beautiful

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you Kathleen

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