This Morning Dawn Came Down Like Dust
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This morning dawn came down like dust Cascading from the grinding sun. I said to someone that I trust, This morning dawn came down like dust. My eyes were sleepy, full of rust. Perhaps, she said, the summer’s done. This morning dawn came down like dust Cascading from the grinding sun.
I like this form and you've met it well. I also enjoy your muse of 'natural phenomenon', if that's what it is - it certainly seems to be, to me. :-)
Dawn like dust
With someone I trust
Grinding sun
Sunday morning
Coming down