This Morning Dawn Came Down Like Dust

[Stanley Wotring]

As the dust gets wiped away, morning turns into day.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Stan, that’s right

[David MacGregor]

Dawn like dust

With someone I trust

Grinding sun

Sunday morning

Coming down

[Jonathan Potter]

Good one — thanks, David

[roger hawcroft]

I like this form and you've met it well. I also enjoy your muse of 'natural phenomenon', if that's what it is - it certainly seems to be, to me. :-)

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Roger. Good call!

[Karen E Sandberg]

I really like this poem. Somehow, the rhymes are playful & easy!

[Luis A. Estable]

I like the rhythm this has when one reads it aloud. And part of it is due to the good rhyme-scheme. This is simple but quite poetic.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Luis