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Richbee's avatar

Rise and fall of horizon’s line gone astray as the day meets moon rise.

To see in a photo the rise of land only enhances you poem, not distract from the movement of time.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Richard

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Looking forward to see the past!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

That’s right — thanks, Stan

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Fred Hanson's avatar

Very good. Loved "blent"

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Fred, it’s a special treat to hear from you hear, good sir.

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Nicely done Mr Poet. A magic muddle of past and present, then the future, beam of light to wake the eyes.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Dr. Stargazer

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Mary Pierce's avatar

Luscious!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Mary

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John Martin's avatar

A particularly striking last line.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, John

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