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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

I like the humble actuality of this poem. The quiet way it was brought into being. Now it’s here where nothing was before. And your rhymes and repetitions make it very memorable.

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

The rhythm of this poem is hypnotic!

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Haram Tanveer's avatar

You put better words to my feelings <3

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

A triplet violet

Fleurs de lis

Un deux trois

Clover for three.

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Grief's Reliefs by DJ Baker's avatar

Sweet and fun.

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Jed Moffitt's avatar

What if Escher and Mobius travelled together to monument valley?

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