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I like the humble actuality of this poem. The quiet way it was brought into being. Now it’s here where nothing was before. And your rhymes and repetitions make it very memorable.

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The rhythm of this poem is hypnotic!

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You put better words to my feelings <3

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A triplet violet

Fleurs de lis

Un deux trois

Clover for three.

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Sweet and fun.

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What if Escher and Mobius travelled together to monument valley?

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