Unremembered Dream

[Stanley Wotring]

Love “music of invisibility”.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Stan

[Stanley Wotring]

You’re just seeing the song.

[John Martin]

Not much enjambment. And the word is 'end-stopping'.

[Jonathan Potter]

Not much enjambment was exactly what I was aiming for and cloture is a synonym of end-stopping.

[ville Iso ahola]

Nice one the cinema of you and music of invisibility (thats original) in your dreams

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you

[Patris]

Gorgeous writing.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Patris

[Malcolm J McKinney]

In my dreams I sometimes seem to have lights and cameras and writers and directors and they continue even after coming half awake then dozing off again.

Then sometimes they are simple.

Thanks for your poem.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Malcolm. That's a nice extension of what I was getting at.

[Malcolm J McKinney]

Your poems do inspire my literal endeavours.

[Mahdi Meshkatee]

Hey Jonathan,

I am inspired by your poetic exercise and execution.

Wishing you light

Mahdi

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Mahdi

[Mary Pierce]

You are just amazing!

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Mary!