If I suggested a getaway to Lisa like that, I am pretty sure she would not turn me down. Although I hear there are no Sonnets allowed on the menu for the Early Bird Catch in Daytona Beach.
I stopped on this line:
"Let's be like grapes some slingshot flings"
And re-read it out loud just to feel the shape it made in my mouth.
Oh, what a beauty of a poem. I have already planned my winter escape via metal wings for 2025. For now, I splash and dive with the mermaids on these southern shores 😊
I don't know how much more of this wonderful, superb, and insightful poetry you write that I can tolerate. You blow my mind, and I am entirely enthroned in "POTTER'S POETRY."
Keep up your usual creativity, and as NIKE says, "JUST DO IT!"
The imagery!!
Beautiful, my friend! Thank you for the escape!
If I suggested a getaway to Lisa like that, I am pretty sure she would not turn me down. Although I hear there are no Sonnets allowed on the menu for the Early Bird Catch in Daytona Beach.
I stopped on this line:
"Let's be like grapes some slingshot flings"
And re-read it out loud just to feel the shape it made in my mouth.
Oh the gorgeousness of it all! Love this.
So perfect! Let us go!
Oh, what a beauty of a poem. I have already planned my winter escape via metal wings for 2025. For now, I splash and dive with the mermaids on these southern shores 😊
So good.
Jonathan,
I don't know how much more of this wonderful, superb, and insightful poetry you write that I can tolerate. You blow my mind, and I am entirely enthroned in "POTTER'S POETRY."
Keep up your usual creativity, and as NIKE says, "JUST DO IT!"
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Another little furnace of a poem--how fun!
"Let's be like grapes some slingshot flings
Into a smiling goddess's magical mouth"
Love and aviation!
Stirs the soul
Makes the heart yearn
Eager for morning’s light.
Thank you Jonathan.
A metal flying machine to de icicle crystals from the eves to melt slowly in a tropical drink. Pino colada please.
Would like to take her there too!
Fantastic, Jonathan.
Perfectly lovely. And convincing. ;^)
That last stanza! 💛