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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Bethel. That's a lovely synopsis!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Another fun poem!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Stan! On a related note, you might like this: https://jopomojo.substack.com/p/my-pa-was-a-cowboy-with-a-degree

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Why don’t you love me? Question asked for ages. Join the train passengers, get in line with those waiting for a ticket to ride. Brenda Lee and Patsy Cline are already aboard. Lots of hankies for tears or laughter later.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Yes, indeed -- thank you, Richard. See Also: https://jopomojo.substack.com/p/my-pa-was-a-cowboy-with-a-degree

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Thanks. Will lasso.

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mo mo's avatar

hankies!

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Patris's avatar

My favorite so far- and all of them fun - but I thought I caught his voice here.

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Patris's avatar

This explains you. Love your dad. Wow. Brilliant

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you 🙏❤️

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Broo's avatar

Are you building a temple in heaven?

Forever's a long, long time!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

I'll never get out of this world alive

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DeeDee D's avatar

Well, this is just frigging delightful!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you!

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

The cowboy spirit shining through this one.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, my old Montana pal.

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