Pre-Sunrise Sestina

[Lis McDermott]

I love the line: wondering about my family history felt in the mirror and the back of my mind; and the lovely alliteration; dim grim grin

Wonderful sestina.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Lis

[Stanley Wotring]

Each sunrise is a rebirth.

[Jonathan Potter]

Amen thanks Stan

[JP Dávila]

Beautiful sestina

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, JP

[Kim Nelson]

In this ode to age and love and living well, this section is exquisite:

"to bed to touch the lovely back

of my lover in the dim

calm of our marriage bed"

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Kim

[Ronald Drimmel]

Lovely..

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Ron

[Mike Speriosu]

WOW. Expertly crafted. Delicious.

[Jonathan Potter]

Many thanks, Mike

[Sharon Hudson]

Beautiful, Jonathan! The photographs, and the easy relationship with your love, the thoughts at waking, and the memories of glorious sunsets together. What a sweet life.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Sharon

[Mark Rico]

I love the envoy! Just peace.

[Jonathan Potter]

Thanks, Mark

[Maya C. Popa]

Beautiful!!!! 🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼

[Jonathan Potter]

Thank you, Maya 🙏