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Patris's avatar

Listening and reading this just now. Beautifully done, painful and consoling. For those of us who’ve known separation from one we need to hold to feel we can breathe, so familiar and poignant. 53 years ago my boyfriend (humans of as many years) arrived back after basic training, changed, for us to marry.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Patris. Painful and consoling is precisely the mood I was trying to capture.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Re. the pain, you might also recall the meniscus.

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Patris's avatar

How could I forget? (Though it’s my right shoulder most of the time)

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Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Absolutely wonderful. Perfect ending. (And may you soon find your way back to her.)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you my friend. The long travel day, however, I’m glad to say, was in fact going back to her -- after too long apart.

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Karen E Sandberg's avatar

So fine. "Like you are and like I am as we navigate the morning bells to catch the sunrise"

Lines that make me wish I'd thought of them. Thanks for this one!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Karen

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I can feel your words running through your photos, Jonathan, the clouds, the sun, the water.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks Paul 🙏

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