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Brian Jobe's avatar

Marvelous!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you!

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Chris Bodor's avatar

Words as beautiful as a sunrise.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

many thanks

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Christine A Myres's avatar

Where is this? Please, it is gorgeous ...

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

It's on the Columbia River near where I live in Kennewick, Washington.

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Christine A Myres's avatar

So incredibly beautiful out there! Thanks. And the poem is lovely too ... sorry not to say when I asked. 😁

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

I figured you'd come around about the poem :)

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Christine A Myres's avatar

Ok, I have to subscribe ... 🙄😊

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Ken LéMarchand's avatar

This is a well-written triolet, my friend. Despite being so simple, the form can be quite deceiving, making placement very awkward when not executed carefully. However, you've caused it to flow quite nicely, Jon.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your assessment.

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