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Aug 12, 2023Liked by Jonathan Potter

Marvelous!

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Thank you!

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Words as beautiful as a sunrise.

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many thanks

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Aug 14, 2023Liked by Jonathan Potter

Where is this? Please, it is gorgeous ...

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It's on the Columbia River near where I live in Kennewick, Washington.

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Aug 15, 2023Liked by Jonathan Potter

So incredibly beautiful out there! Thanks. And the poem is lovely too ... sorry not to say when I asked. 😁

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I figured you'd come around about the poem :)

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Aug 15, 2023Liked by Jonathan Potter

Ok, I have to subscribe ... 🙄😊

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This is a well-written triolet, my friend. Despite being so simple, the form can be quite deceiving, making placement very awkward when not executed carefully. However, you've caused it to flow quite nicely, Jon.

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Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your assessment.

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