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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

This is so great it works backwards too reading line by line in reverse order or reading the stanzas in reverse. Brilliant Jonathan, you picked the best titles.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, WP

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Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

I hadn’t listened to Poliice in a long time, and then this morning they came up in my feed. We listened to them for awhile before lunch. I came back to Substack, and I found this first in my feed. Serendipity! Love the poem! Thank you for sharing!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Funny how that happens. Thanks, Charlotte :)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Or, as Sting said:

With one breath, with one flow

You will know synchronicity

A sleep trance, a dream dance

A shared romance, synchronicity

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Monica P.'s avatar

Jonathan, put to some music. You know what I’m saving. So glad you have been doing these song titles.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, Monica. I might try to.

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Every poem you write helps beat the King of Pain.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

There's a little black spot on the sun today ...

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

The other ones are complete bullshit.

Love it.

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

(That’s a Police quote for anyone unaware!)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

There's a house on my street

and it looks real neat ...

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Mathew Snyder's avatar

🤘🏻

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Mathew

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Broo's avatar

"Drop yr weapon and put yr hands up! & Don't u dare defund me!"

(oops -- wrong police...!)

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Broo's avatar

Love & theft, ah yes…!

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Stirling S Newberry's avatar

It takes time for an echo generation to be heard.

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